http://soundcloud.com/red-juliette/mind-eraser
This is a song I produced, engineered, arranged, mixed and mastered. Musicians are friends of mine. So yeah I can do it better. Just not into rap, and I wasn't giving bad criticism, I was just helping him out and giving tips. I'm definately not laughing, I'm encouraging him to keep doing it and improving himself.
I wasn't saying any names but if I have to, Nemesis is the ignorant one.
About your production, it sounds pretty good, bit too clean imo though but I guess that's a matter of taste. I like the more rough sounds cause it gives some extra edge to the mix.
Dacads how long are you doing this? I hear myself making music when I started, you definitely have it in you to become really good at this. I can't really give you like pointers because it's up to you to make up your own sound/style. All I can say the key is to listen to how others do it (making hiphop, I'm doing it too btw). As soon as you realise (this is more important then you might think) what sound is and what's needed to make a particular sound, you'll make very big steps forward. Good luck
Btw if you really insist I might be able to help you, just send me a pm. I rather hear the results though as soon as you realise what I've told you, dont underestimate this.